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Charil, August 27th, 2013, 4:31 pm ( Reply )


I had some alternate dialogue to that fourth panel and now it's in the vote incentive, I'm sorry, I'm so sorry.




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melaredblu, August 27th, 2013, 7:43 pm ( Reply )


Okay, the incentive dialog was really funny. Jokes aside though, I like where this is going so far. It sounds like a pretty unique concept, using these pulse monitors.


vaslittlecrow, August 28th, 2013, 12:11 am ( Reply )


This page was really intense, and then you had to put that alternate dialogue. XD


Charil, August 31st, 2013, 7:34 pm ( Reply )


@melaredblu and @vaslittlecrow: I'm really not the greatest person to be writing a serious story, but I'm also afraid I can't be funny 100% of the time haha.

As to the use of pulse monitors, it was more or less the first thing I included when thinking about the mechanics of the game haha. There had to be a way to monitor both where everyone was and who was still active!


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